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Things to think about:

Establish opening - narrative direction, phones or social media? what is the question I am asking? what am I trying to show? - key themes 

Consider VoiceOver in beginning.

Title sequence - range of people, men, women, tall, short, young old.

Transitions too many black screens for too long.

Background of interviews, microphone, sound levels.

Cut down interviews, possibly have someone younger? Move away from inside, go out of school different locations for interview backgrounds.

Cut out credits.

Need to work on it being coherent throughout.

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