Annotating a draft of poster

After looking into the other posters for BBC Three and after experimenting with some of the photos I took in my previous blog I have constructed a photo in which has an aspect of both phones and laptops. Here I am annotating this poster:

My next steps will be retaking a shot like this however thinking more about the mise-en-scene, I am thinking having it plain, possibly white to enhance the focus even more on the social media in the shot.